Summarising

ARataki Honey

Arataki Honey

“Yay! We are here”I said. I was at Aerotek Honey  with my dad and my  friend Sophie.

When ee got inside me and Sophie went straight to taste the honey. All of the honey was delicious.

After tasting all the honey, we went to find the the Queen bee and we found her after a while of searching.

After we found the queen bee Sophie showed me where a  little Bee Movie was and so me, Sophie and my dad watched it.

After we watched the bee movie we decide to go home and watch a DVD and relax for the rest of the afternoon.

BY DANICA COTTER  

Reflection

I need to work on

adding lots of descriptive

words.  

Lost in the Supermarket

Lost in the supermarket

I was at the supermarket with my mum.I was looking at at coco pops Cereal I turned around and my mum wasn't there. I was scared I walked down to the end of the aisle and acted like I was confident but I really wasn't.

I looked in the next aisle and my mum wasn't there I was more scared than I was before.

I looked in the next aisle and there she was looking at a product. I ran to her and hugged her tight.

My mum asked why I was hugging her tight so I told her what had happened.

Reflection - I need to work on adding more detail.  

moment in time

Munch crunch “yum this popcorn is delicious.”I side We were watching a movie in are epic drive in-movie cars the movie that we were watching was home alone 2 lost in new york.

While we were watching movie the adults were making vanlare ice cream and popping plan popcorn for as to ate while we watching the movie.And i absolutely loved it.

everyone laerfte their hearts out when moth (carter) got a wedgie and a stabil up his but got and he one on his nose.

About half way through the movie i got tired and i laid down in

my drive in-movie car and have a reste lie down.

When the movie finished everyone was tired and the time was ten

o'clock we all had to brush our teeth go to the toilet then go

to sleep all nice and restid for the last day of camp.

                                

By Danica cotter.:)

REFLECTION

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w.a.l.t add Hummer

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Thanks

Dear Christina   

Thank you for coming on camp with us. I really appreciate it and here is one of my highlights on

camp. My favorite thing on camp was watching the drive in movie because the movie was very funny. (the movie was home alone 2.)   

Here is a poem that I wrote just for you,

Cheerful as a cheerleader.  

harmless as a ladybug.

rare as a diamond.

intelligent  as a panda.

s What is a scientist.

trusted  as a dog.

intelligent as a cat

nicer than a butterfly.

awesome as a hero.

Sincerely Danica 😊

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