Monday 2 May 2016

Lost in the Supermarket

Lost in the supermarket


I was at the supermarket with my mum.I was looking at at coco pops Cereal I turned around and my mum wasn't there. I was scared I walked down to the end of the aisle and acted like I was confident but I really wasn't.


I looked in the next aisle and my mum wasn't there I was more scared than I was before.


I looked in the next aisle and there she was looking at a product. I ran to her and hugged her tight.


My mum asked why I was hugging her tight so I told her what had happened.



Reflection - I need to work on adding more detail.  





1 comment:

  1. WOW! that was interesting danica! i hope you did not have a REALLY big nightmare by sleeping in the shop!

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